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Ron Lyner
Ron Lyner
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Posted : May 28, 2002 13:10
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : May 28, 2002 17:36
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nice intro.. i like the sample.
the kick and bassline are cute, i would take the bassline down a few notes to match with the intro's dialougue though. the maraksh is a bit too painfull on the ear, EQ it. the synth line need to be balanced to match the track's general volume level.. also the percussions. nice sample useage in 2:30. ohh - same as the above, PAINFUL! like needles in my ears. you got some double kicks there that are too strong when played together. remove those and leave the kick as it was. it was fine.
nice bassline games, i like the transpositioning.
try adding a line of closed hi hats, add to the groove. the "phone" sample is cute, use it wisely.. nice "plastic" sounds too...
all in all, nice structure, nice story, well told, BUT - you need to work on your EQ - many instruments suffer from high pitched sound which pains the ears and tires them.. other than that? nice proggy tune, wouldnt mind digging to somthing like that, when it's finished.
  "We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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iKomah
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Posted : May 29, 2002 02:45
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pretty cool tune except for those painfull sounds just mentioned above.. though not really my cup of tea, but not bad at all 
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Ron Lyner
Ron Lyner
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Posted : May 29, 2002 03:08
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thanks...
more reviews ??
http://www.o-zen.com/art/ranal
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You wanna dance?!...I know a tune...itīs called stick and CUT!!
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Jeto
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Posted : May 29, 2002 04:49
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Great track it can use more "Leadz"
to make it more intresting
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Kaz
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Posted : May 30, 2002 16:49
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Some great elements, I didn't like the transpositions on the bassline - maybe you should work in chords instead of scales on that one. The comments above basically covered everything, except that I'll change Jeto's comment to just add another element or two with a clearer tone, will do wonders for the groove if done right.
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Vibe Tribe
Vibe Tribe
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 14:11
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Ron Lyner
Ron Lyner
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 14:14
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what was wrong with the bassline?
maybe i can fix it?
http://www.o-zen.com/art/ranal
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You wanna dance?!...I know a tune...itīs called stick and CUT!!
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Vibe Tribe
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 14:17
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first make it more FAT, than get rid of the games..... well this what i think, but it only for my taste, so dont take it personaly, do what you think right to do
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Ron Lyner
Ron Lyner
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 14:22
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ok.. thanks..
http://www.o-zen.com/art/ranal
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You wanna dance?!...I know a tune...itīs called stick and CUT!!
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civilian
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 18:08
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my opinion is
Great Track, MAN!
Very good sounds
your Best Track & Very Killer!
need more vol to bass sound
and.......
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Ron Lyner
Ron Lyner
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 18:15
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Thank you PooK
http://www.o-zen.com/art/ranal
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You wanna dance?!...I know a tune...itīs called stick and CUT!!
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civilian
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 19:58
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hehehehe
bevakasha "RENEL"!
ammm... ma? |
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Mini-Mal
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 21:03
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English plz
P . L . U . R ! |
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Sputer
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 21:06
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bevakasha = Please
RENEL = I have no idea what this mean 
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Follow your heart, not the people around you"... |
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