Scenix
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 16:53
This track is really good. Think you should add some break's with pan and lowband filter low->high . And also try to make some breaks that are more unique
at 6.20 its really enoyable to listen to it . the lead and pad is amazing nice!This is one of the most intresting tracks imo ibeen listen to here. keep send your tracks!
Art Of Existence
Art Of Existence
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 17:23
wow dude! im commenting as i listen!
The first 1.30 minutes are just great! then then you should add more drums/percussion its gets a little. (note LITTLE) boring. but thats easy to fix!
Great breaks and great harmony.
Buildup at 5 minutes is great! Although i would have placed more drums. when the track starts again. Faster hi-hats and more to make it even faster then it is!
love the tweaky synth at 6.18
Some would say cheesy sound. But its a matter of taste as always!
its uplifting and very unique.
Just one thing. Add more percussion. Then you have a complete awesome track.
indeed your best so far!
/Phillip (Nevarakka)
dj chichke
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 17:55
Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 21:43
U worked the bassline very well in this one mate
Great variations wich gives the track a great story with nice leads and pads that follows. Airy atmospheres and cool breaks. Psychedelic, yet driving and controlled.
Some small after touches, detaile work and its a solid bomb!
very good track!
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 8, 2011 18:37
First of all thank you for such nice comments!!! I finally think that Im working correctly and you may imagine how does that makes me feel!
@Scenix: Yes I still have to add those crazy breaks, I usually leave all that stuff for 1 - 2 days after I finish the track basically because its pure audio editing and imo cuts off inspiration while creating and also because I do all the editing in other DAW and for that everything needs to be perfectly eq first Its really cool that you find this track so enjoyable and unique, that just made my day! Thanx!
@AOE: OK actually that about the drums/percussion is right, I totally forgot them I was focusing so much on those speech samples.. hehe. I will also try adding those faster hihats, thx for noticing and letting me know, really appreciated comment!
@Chichke: hehe many people tells me that about hihats in my tracks, I think my monitors are sucking in hi freqs or maybe my ears?? but anyway thx ill take som dB down to them and im really considering on changing the sample too, about the play it needs to be worked out a little more The sound @5:50 i remember when I was adding it I also thought it was a bit noobish but if you say that maybe it REALLY is, so ill work it soon. THX!
@Wizack: Yep thx my new room helps me better to hear those bass freqs I will do all the aftertouches and audio editing asap, its that i ended up really tyred because I writed all the track in two continious days. Cheers bro!!
