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a dreamy melodic morning
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agnindhana
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Posted : May 25, 2006 08:14
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something i have been floating along with...
check it out..
soundclick.com/djbipin
Stargazers.
lemme know what u think...would love some feedback.
love and light. |
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pavaka
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Posted : May 25, 2006 13:43
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ganeshaaa
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Posted : May 25, 2006 15:11
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hey baba  !!
for starters id like to tell u that stargazers is simply beautiful after 5 mins really nice !!
but i feel personally like ur track lacks proper equing i can hardly feel the highs and a deeper and fuller bass would be nice in my opinion but i really like ur style !!
also are u using a normal onboard soundcard cause tht could be a cause of poor sound quality as im also forced to use my onboard soundcard for the moment  !
and for the 2nd track ur working on 'radiant smoothie' hav u used any real instruments ?
my choice of music would be slightly diferent but i like the feel of ur music and hopefully with some more work i think ull make some beautiful music!!
hope to see more of ur work soon 
bOm
ps - here is my latest piece of work which is still under progress would love to know wht u think baba :-
http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/88371/forum/26 |
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agnindhana
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Posted : May 25, 2006 15:16
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agnindhana
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Posted : May 25, 2006 20:16
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soooo sorry...
something wrong with the link...will update tomorrow...pls check back.
thanka... |
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agnindhana
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Posted : May 26, 2006 08:22
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candyman
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Posted : May 27, 2006 20:21
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Am listening to it right now.. pretty cool.. i especially like the middle onwards and more so after 5:22.. could have stretched the ending a bit.. but track is pretty long anyways.. Not bad at all in my opinion..
BOOM
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pavaka
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Posted : May 28, 2006 17:57
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Axolotyl
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Posted : May 29, 2006 07:09
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Interesting track mate. Bassline is very uppity and in ya face... quite different. Feels a tad obvious... like it doesnt flow all that well. Only say this because your asking for tough criticism.
Synths are nice too with plenty of layers but not too cluttered. Lots of variation and movement in them, infact they are the strong point of this track.
More percussion or more variation in the percussion could give the track more energy perhaps. The hihats tend to sound a bit hissy at times too?! Again... just being picky.. they dont sound tha bad.
I like the strucure of the track. Its fiarly drawn out and flows well. Nice work, keep it up |
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Dj PsYpOx
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Posted : May 29, 2006 16:38
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agnindhana
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Posted : May 30, 2006 07:52
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thanks for the reviews guys...
ganesha...u were right..hi's were missin...brought it up a bit.lemme know if it sounds better...
i am usin in built sound card,  hope i can buy a better one soon...
also doin this on computer speakers...sucks...thats another one on the shoppin list.
and no,i havent used any instruments in radiant smoothie...i quite lke radiant,have done it a few months back..have taken it off actually,will tighten it up a bit and put it out again...thanks mate...
axo... thats exactly the kind of criticism i was lookin for...somethn that i can work on...keep lookin in a tell me whatever u think mate...
k and d thanks...
love and light. |
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:Shiva.Yamin:
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Posted : May 30, 2006 14:59
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its a good track...the bassline is good...its rythm n its flowin...i am liking the kick n the synth...nice sounds...groovy n bouncy track...good werk! |
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((( MOKKSHH )))
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Posted : Jul 4, 2006 21:44
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diskOtek
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Posted : Jul 5, 2006 18:41
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dreamy and melodic!
exactly as you said!
if it was in lower bpm and the bassline not rolling alltime,i would have liked it a lot more!
rest is really more then ok!
really cool melodies!
keep it up!
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