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Posted : Aug 2, 2010 04:54:13
Made this song a couple of months ago but only just finished it off coz I've been too busy with study. The song is a bit of an experiment to see the different and varied sounds I could get out of the blues scale.
I'd like to know what you guys think. I'm not sure if I'm trying to do too much with the bass around 2.50 and 5.50. And I feel it might be a bit busy in parts toward the end but I'd like others' opinions.
mk47
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Posted : Aug 2, 2010 08:34
nice 1 , u obviously know what ur doing but my suggestion would be to maybe try and use a different bassline here , not the kbbb , maybe like a k-b-k-b- type something ,is this vb 1 btw ? .. listen to some haltya , lemon slide , digressio traviato etc for ideas , maybe some cartoon boinks and farts , eitherway , cool music
aXis
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Posted : Aug 2, 2010 09:06
wow! super cool. im a fan.
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Posted : Aug 2, 2010 13:49
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Posted : Aug 6, 2010 03:35
good work man
but i think the bass, starting at 1:28, didn't fit well..
You should try something with a little more groove.. not a straight bassline
But the rest is awesome man! you did very well
keep the good work!
Urucubaca
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Posted : Aug 6, 2010 15:40
Awesome synth work man!
I liked a lot, very 'musicality' stuff, sounds melodic, fast, funny and good feeling.
About the basslines, test another variations, or someting more linear, maybe can fit well because the synth lines are realy complex and doing a lot of notes hehehehe.
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Posted : Aug 9, 2010 05:27
Yeah, with the 1.28-1.54 section I was trying an atonal nighttime type psy before kicking into the groovey melodic stuff that follows as a way of giving the song a bit of contrast but I guess it's a bit too abrupt and I'll fitting. Might try a k-bb baseline there instead. Oh well, it's all a learning process
) and sort out some of the fx.
