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2nd track post: Wave Level, unclassified
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pH_
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 18, 2007 10:59
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hello friends. this is my 2nd track i've posted for critique/direction. i've been toying around with it for some time, and think it's staring to get somewhere with my funky style. i am not sure what style it would be classified as, so it's unclassified!
http://72.36.238.234/lindollars/wave-level.mp3
would love to hear what you people think of it. of course it is not finished  |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Dec 18, 2007 14:27
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Hallo pH_
Well , Must say i realy impressed from the intro . There is something in that part makes you feel good immediately on the beginning , Not usual one . Could feel my self runing in the fields when a 1000.000 bee's flying behind and around me try hard get me alive .
Kik need abit more power imo . Bass start cool but after two min' start being abit boring (For me) . Hh never change in , Why ? . All those whistle in the backround - Think its kill the track (Again - My opinion , You dont have to take it as somthing undoubted , If you like it go for it) Just think its to irritating and torture the listener ears , And i think that without them (But with other elements - Like 1 , 2 more synth in) You can get an realy nice minimal track . There is some sound work , But overal cool idea .
Keep it up ..
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