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2 new downtempo tracks of mine
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Ascension
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Posted : May 4, 2012 22:53:06
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HallunX
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Posted : May 6, 2012 23:54
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Wow the 1st one, brilliant track !
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Ascension
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Posted : May 7, 2012 04:11
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Equilizyme
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Posted : May 8, 2012 03:26
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hey kevin!
1. i think from the beginning to 2.24 takes a long time, maybe you could add something there to make it a bit more busy (i realize its downtempo, but i still think its mildly sparse compared to the rest of the track). the bongos at 5.50 are awesome!
2. nice intro! the gated padish thing at 1.40 is a nice touch. starting at 4.18 i think some of the notes you have chosen may not be the best choices, i like a little dissonance, but this is a bit too much imho. the tone of the synth is cool tho! neat song overall! i like the glitched perc at the end
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Ascension
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Posted : May 10, 2012 18:41
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Thanks Luke! I realize that the longer I work on downtempo tracks the more boring parts appear since I tend to anticipate what is coming next. Guess I need to let tracks sit for a bit longer, then re-listen.
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Grevinsky
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Posted : May 15, 2012 15:59
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I agree with equili.
The start of the first needs some work.
But otherwise i really enjoyed the song.
Really awesome drums! and nice atmo´s.
Got kind of a jungley vibe
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