Rework
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Posted : Jul 27, 2015 14:33:28
Hi Psy people
I have using this forum on/off for some time now, i have been searching for answers to my questions regarding to music production. When i have posted i've got answers that i could think about, learn and evolve. At some point i feel my ears "getting better" each time i sit down and play around and, but never the less im miles from my goal, but in my own opinion i go slowly the right way. Now i have made a track called "betrayed" i like how it sounds right now, but maybe ind one week i wont like it, because then i can hear some of my mistakes.
The reason i post is that i would be gratefull if you would spend some minutes of your time to hear the track, or just some of it, and then tell me what i can do better, what i can try or whatever you feel like. I know im the only one who can improve my own work and i have to read more, practice more, but many in here have good knoowledge and know what could be good to do. I hope you will listen and share some words
RhinoCeros
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Posted : Jul 30, 2015 23:35
What a rocking vibe the intro has great suspense i notice you had a clash at 15 seconds i could suggest a different sound there maybe a sweeping down sound same length there is a nice lead at 4:10 that i think it could come back at 5:31 or 9 bars after and could end with that
