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mk47
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Posted : Jul 23, 2007 16:10
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Jul 23, 2007 20:15
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Some of the leads are really loud man.
The K&B needs to come out more i think.
Good work on the percussion.
I'm not too sure of the breaks. There are just too many and i dont find the transitions smooth. Maybe more swooshes?
The levels at some points in the track are way out. Just check at a few of the break points.
Overall, i think arrangement needs more work.
and definitely fewer breaks. 
The sounds are not bad but i can't say i enjoyed all of them thoroughly. Sorry!
Thanks for sharing and Good luck!
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FaceHead
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Posted : Jul 24, 2007 02:28
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i have to agree its not that there are too many breaks i think they just interrupt the flow and definately the bass needs work the kick sounds good but the bass is lacking good leads towards the end though. keep at work on this one
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mk47
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Posted : Jul 24, 2007 08:12
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hey , nice .exactly the kind of feedback i was looking for .. ur right ..the arrangement does need more work .. and the breaks too ... cool . ill try fixing these .. hopeflly final version comes out nice .. thnx again for taking the time to review it facehead , warrior .really appreciate it
meanwhile , any others wanna have a go at it .. ?
take care : )
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mk47
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Posted : Jul 24, 2007 21:13
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Alias
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Posted : Jul 26, 2007 18:59
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very funny music.....makes me smile!you really have story telling in this track!
also you improved your bassline work!
keep up the improvement!
btw:i recognize some nice samples
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mk47
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Posted : Jul 28, 2007 07:47
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hey alias  .. yeah .. thnx for the samples m8 .. still trying to fit them in a little better here ...anyway many more bass fixes , deletions and new additions scince last post .. heres new version .. it nears completion !
link : http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=8208AD1E512B24B2
still doing this one .. would love some more feedback if possible .. thnks : )
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warrior
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Posted : Jul 28, 2007 09:47
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killer...i like ur music,great baseline......killer leads fx i m ur fan now...plz teach me how 2 make such baseline... |
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galactic monkey
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Posted : Jul 29, 2007 02:05
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nice work bro!!! keep on keepin on
peace!
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mk47
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Posted : Jul 31, 2007 07:43
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*bump*
thnx guys . someone else wanna listen and leave some pointers maby ?
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abraham316
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Posted : Jul 31, 2007 08:37
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aXis
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Posted : Jul 31, 2007 15:31
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really good . |
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phazed
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Posted : Jul 31, 2007 18:38
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sounds good! 
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S7a5
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Posted : Aug 1, 2007 02:10
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bass=too weak IMH0 |
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mk47
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Posted : Aug 4, 2007 00:53
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