Taii
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Posted : Jul 20, 2010 18:22:57
Hi
Im really not sure about this one, is it total crap or not that bad? :S
Also the melody parts, dunno if it fits there or not..
And of cours EQing and everything, any comments appreciated http://soundcloud.com/taii
Psybro
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Posted : Jul 21, 2010 01:04
Haha Dude, there is nothing wrong with this. Its not crap!
definitely not what id call dark but still a really great track man..very clean production work, great sounding/fitting lead
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Taii
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Posted : Jul 23, 2010 18:06
Thanks for the nice words:)
Yeah i know its not really dark, ive been trying to put some bits of goa and "dark" together and sometimes the result is hard to classify xP
Anyway, if its clean i have to thank Isratrance and especially Zero Blade (if i remember correctly) for good advices:)
Cheers
http://soundcloud.com/taii
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jul 24, 2010 07:47
Dude your track is far away from crap!! Actually it inspired me and im just about to start a track and I can tell that this track is going to be my main influence hehe We need more artists like you that create this kind of trips!!
Good Vibes!!
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Aug 6, 2010 11:10
The idea and the concept are realy cool and also the build of the track but there
alot of sound work to do , Eq , Mix and more 'Warming' sounds and effects .
Urucubaca
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Posted : Aug 6, 2010 15:34
Cool Style man! GOA Dark, were in Brazil we do this combination too, hehehe!
But i think you need to improve your EQ, get a better kick and bassline. The synths are very cool, interesting melodies and good dark noises synths 'speaching'.
If you have made this song in a hardware its pretty good! But if you're in a daw you can rework the mix of the track.
Taii
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Posted : Aug 6, 2010 21:55
Thank you all for the feedback
Vision Seeker - i use FL studio
And yeah i could learn better EQ and mixing, could you share some specific tips what i should do? Kick is just Fruit Kick and i started making kicks not long ago so i agree it sounds bad, i started searching for better kick synths.
I probably wont work on this track anymore, but i will try to learn from it for another one
We need more artists like you that create this kind of trips!!
and i started making kicks not long ago so i agree it sounds bad, i started searching for better kick synths.
