snowdogg
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Posted : Dec 10, 2010 04:18:02
still needs speech samples etc.,
thanks for listening!
orgytime
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Posted : Dec 10, 2010 09:21
hi, i like it.
-but i wouldnt play the same bassline harmonics all time until its boring. maybe combine just some gallop bass at the root note (velocity)
-for the percussion you could try to layer clap & snare, 2 different open HH, crashes for fatter sound... its thin at the moment.
also use velocity...
-try to better arange the incoming of your HH´s, sounds and leads (listen and recreate from your favorite artists)
-your last lead seems to be not well processed (hard resonances wich hurts in the ears), you can try eq, multiband compressors, reduce resonance, layering the lead with a supersaw would make fuller sound again.
snowdogg
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Posted : Dec 10, 2010 13:53
yo, thanks for the advice!
your right about the bass dont know why i just used that when i made 4 or 5 basslines at the start
a snare and clap is already layerd!, ive changed volumes now tho i know it sounds shitt. need to work moreon hats
i find psy arrangement difficult!,:(.. but ive tryed making a few changes check it out!
fixed that lead somewhat cheers for the tips
Plasmorh
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Posted : Dec 10, 2010 20:49
isnt bass a bit to loud? :x
dunno.... sounds trippy and joyfull ahah
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
snowdogg
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Posted : Dec 10, 2010 21:44
yea mabythanks!, i turned it down a bit.
after listening a few times i started to hate it..!
so i made a new tune out of it haha:)
just cant bring myself to finish any of these..
snowdogg
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Posted : Dec 10, 2010 23:13
tiny bit at the end bit shouldnt be there:(
MeditationProfonde
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Posted : Dec 11, 2010 00:56
Nice melodies. The bass is maybe too present and it needs maybe some athmospheres and pads to make a better climax
http://www.myspace.com/psyrit
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Dec 11, 2010 04:56
I dont like intro at all.
Kick & bass sounds good (on normal speakers)
Percussion and cymbals could be brighter imo.
I dont like @1:48 and the bridge @2:09 is going nowhere..
Nice lead @2:35 and 3:07 but the feel "alone"
Break @3:27 I dont like too
I understand its a WIP, but a longer and more worked version could be better to review it.
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
Flubber
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Posted : Dec 12, 2010 14:46
beat and bass are suberb!!
the synth at the end is great also!
nice work.
8D
