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145 daytime track wip
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Icetoon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 21:30:34
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Okay so I'm pretty unsure about this one... any crit would be helpful. Don't make this genre much but I got bored 
P.S : Some Breaking Bad - Jesse ("Bitch") for the lolz. |
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psyraal
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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 23:00
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flows along very nicely, also has a nice vibe around it, almost a 'chillout' track, you should really present us with the finished work (:
the only thing i find a bit 'off tone': the sweeps/risers, idk, feels like they're in the wrong tune
keep it up
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Icetoon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 23:05
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Thanks man  Yeah they are haha i just slapped some random rise samples in there for now. Was a bit lazy haha.
cheers! |
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Sep 19, 2012 02:00
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