llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 18, 2012 01:55:59
I hope you enjoy the trip!
I've taken into account many tips from this forum, feedback is welcomend! =)
This is the first version I've rendered,
peace
Larrikin
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Posted : Feb 18, 2012 05:25
The kick and bass are fighting each other a bit, eq or sidechain to fix.
The drone / pad that comes in at 1:30 takes over the whole mix, eq some offending freq's out.
Your hat / drum track is very weak in the mix, bring it forward / boost the highs.
I personally got bored of the same bass pattern by the end, change it up a bit.
llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 18, 2012 11:48
Thx for listening mate!
Yea the mix is pretty rough, I guess I got excited and posted... needed some feedback to go on anyway. Much appreciated. Already working on it =)
I'll up next version some time this weekend,
peace!
ierofante
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Posted : Feb 19, 2012 01:03
It will be more effective to not label your music like that.
People who likes progressive will be disappointed, and you will alienate many potential listeners in advance.
You are creative, keep up with the hard work.
Fire Walk With Me
llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 19, 2012 19:40
You are right ierofante, that label was the result of my own confusion, I'll keep that in mind.
What style would you say this is if I may ask?
And thank you for listening man!
ierofante
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Posted : Feb 20, 2012 00:00
I'm not good at labelling things Have a nice life, mate.
Fire Walk With Me
llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 20, 2012 13:22
"have a nice life" hehe, aren't we being too dramatic?
I mean, people usually say that when you know you won't see them for a loooong time =)
or when you break up with someone, you know?
Larrikin
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Posted : Feb 21, 2012 01:53
Keep at it !
