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vipal
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Posted : Aug 12, 2014 17:58:13
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Bipolar
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Posted : Aug 17, 2014 00:42
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Cool bro, I really tripped out listen to it! I will listen again! hehe
minute 1.10 its really interesting! I love those noises, and the lead! maybe you could give them more presence in your mix, your noises and leads in general, so they have more power, the bassline its really clean, I love the way you play with the high hats! really cool! I would probably try to fill in some gaps, not in the entire song,! but in some parts to make it more interesting! like in 2.50 maybe more FX, or some type of stabs could help, 3.40 too, maybe some type of effect, just like magic or acids noises , to help those leads interact better, but the track is really nice man! I love the feel, really psychedelic! the volume of the leads in minute 5.28 its really nice, maybe try to use that same volume in the mix, with the leads in the beginning of your track, like arround 1.20, but really nice track!! good job! peace! |
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vipal
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Posted : Aug 17, 2014 15:49
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Bipolar
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Posted : Aug 17, 2014 19:36
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No problem bro!! Sometimes I don't logging that much, but I you ever need a listen you can PM too, and I will gladly take a listen  but overall very nice job |
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Aug 20, 2014 09:26
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Hey man.
Intro is bit strange, almost sounds like you mixing from one track to another.
Good squelchyness around 1.00 .
the hat which comes 1.53 sounds a little bit loud.
I miss some crashes and risers to mark the progression.
3.00 is cool. Maybe you could progress the acid lead there for a longer time making it build and develope.
A break somewhere would be nice too.
Otherwise cool song, sure got old school vibe over it
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vipal
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Posted : Aug 20, 2014 11:38
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ok Grevinsky, thanks for listening. yes had that comment abt intro before, and also the sharpness and level of percussion here and there, will take better care of that in new song. progressions is now more the focus, sometimes to much in a rush to finish. whats up with your songs,? been some time we heard new one from you.
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Aug 20, 2014 12:23
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Was my pleasure . One good rule i set up for my self which really helps is not to think: I leave this for later, cause many of those things you forget and never go back and fix (atleast me), better to fix it so your happy with it from the start.
Not uploading so much tracks now, working on my debut ep on forestdelic. But i upload something soon
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wirakocha
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Posted : Aug 21, 2014 03:35
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