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138 bpm "Desert"
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Hypnotist
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Posted : Dec 17, 2013 14:00:47
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moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : Dec 17, 2013 14:17
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hey dude
i think it has cool start up.
the part with the hi hats without snare isnt flowing enough for me and when the snare comes in... maybe eq it a bit better. but it works basically.
the part after the break is also nice but you could roll it on more with the percussions.
all in all it seems like a nice idea.
you could make knda boombastic break stuff there. reverb the drums. and enhance space. i like the melodys good but you could ad some nice pads.
keep up the good work
next time remove from the S in the https 
 
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Hypnotist
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Posted : Dec 17, 2013 20:32
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Thanks for the quick answer and for the hints 
I try to improve my hihats and to add some nice pads.
I´ve never tried to reverb the drums in the breaks but i think that´s a good idea..
Have a nice day 
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