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Posted : Jan 28, 2013 17:02:27
so this is a track ive been working on recently, it just kind of made itself, most of the electronic sounds sounds are made with the slim phatty and the percs with maschine. i've reached a point where i cant think of any changes, adjustments etc to do anymore, so any feedback on any part is appreciated
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Posted : Jan 28, 2013 17:20
ooo nice!.
I like the style, nice placement of sounds, little more reverb could suit some of them tho.
Nice growling, chunky and funky.
The hat is quiet low.
Cool influences, i like that it goes forward. awesome with the oriental bag pipe kind of thing The drums dont progress so much tho.
I think you should focus abit there. Making it more drive´y that way.
Its a really cool song, but you could make it even better if you work to make it more drivey.
faster drum rhytms and work abit on the builds.
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Posted : Jan 28, 2013 19:09
yeah i was thinking about putting some more dance-friendly percs on top but didnt really have any luck getting a nice groove that fits, will experiment more on that thanks for taking the time!
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Posted : Jan 28, 2013 20:20
nice track and i am agree whit Grevinsky to make it more drive
but still cool track really fresh stuff you got
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Posted : Jan 29, 2013 14:23
At first I thought WTF is this, but as it progressed it all started to make sense, hahaha Right now listening to this soberly at work a few of the sounds strike me the wrong way, but last night stoned it was just perfect. This track is a nice little oddity, you should keep it that way!
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Posted : Jan 29, 2013 17:12
sweet little oddity indeed. cool choice of kick and bass, dirty low and chunky. i agree with pretty much most of what grevinsky says really. a bit more roll and drive in the sounds could do good. if you are not lucky with percussion work, maybe look into longer bouncing delays to thicken and fill your sound spectrum. and make the sounds you have (or add) talk to each other in an call - answer kinda way.
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Posted : Jan 29, 2013 18:50
thanks for the comments, and yeah its a bit strange, i get lots of inspiration from playing with sounds on n2o ^^
i think ive gotten some perspective on what to focus on next, will adjust accordingly and keep experimenting. thanks again folks, means alot, i dont have that much other sources for good feedback cheers
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so i've been working a bit on this track again, and i'm curious hear some opinions on it as i've hit this dont-know-what-to-do-more-wall again heheh.
i kinda like how it progresses throughout so i didnt want to give it too much drive in the beginning, trying to keep that tension for the end
